The mother and son characters make their appearance on the page where the stanza ‘When people see Gonzo they get a big fright, his owners think he can protect them at night.’
I had an original drawing of the ‘mother’ figure character in the prototype that I completed in January. I decided to go back and review this character and experiment a bit, in order to get the best result. I am also conscious of where I should be putting most of my time in now, in the lead up to the project submission, and am aware that I don’t want to focus on the wrong things. The mother is only present on one page of the book, however, I do think that small details when illustrating are very important, and focusing on these details can enhance the overall feel of a project.
With this in mind, I went back and began to sketch some different hair styles and facial features that came to mind. I also thought of different clothes ideas. I looked online for different inspiration. The general idea was to just have basic clothes on the woman, nothing that is too ‘stand-outish’! Gonzo will be the focal point of this page.
Inspiration (Simple Clothing)
Sketches
Illustrating
I firstly went back to my original illustration and looked at what changes could be made. I noticed that my colour choice gave the impression that the mother was in a suit and made her look very business-like. Of course there is no problem with this. However, I don’t want the mother to have a persona at all, I simply want her to bland in to the scene. I made some initial changes to the colour.
After analysing the face, I came to the conclusion that I like the eye shape. However, I am not happy with the face in general , purely from the way the outline was drawn. I went back and fixed this up and made the face look softer.
This re-construction simply made the face softer and the woman to appear younger. I always find it difficult to find a nice blonde colour on illustrator. I also made the change of blonde to brown hair and pulled the hair-line in slightly also, making the woman look younger again.
I am happy with my illustration now. I had originally planned on starting from scratch. However, I always liked the original illustration but it badly needed some adjustments.